Cretiques


 As stated in the last blog I started editing for the final project already. It was long and rough but I did start. Even though I did not finish editing because I didn’t have all of the clips it was used in preparation. I thought it was a good idea to get the voice of a different person. As a result I asked for the advice of another. The person i asked advice from was my old track coach. I asked him because he was unbiased. Not only that he has no idea or knowledge about the filming industry. I added that point because a person with no knowledge of this has no other obligation but to base the video off what they see. That is the answer I am looking for in result. A answer that is authentic is the best kind because it shows you an outsiders point of view.

After showing him the video he gave me a few pointers. He told me that the video was very entertaining. He also told me that it was impressive for me to be doing something this amazing at my age. The corrections he thinks I should make is that I should be more straight forward. He complained that he didn’t really understand what my movie was about through my opening sequence and he stated that it didn’t really tie into the plot I told him. I believe this is because of my lack of clips. Overall I believe the finished product will be amazing and something he will really enjoy. 


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